He did a good job. A few things I struggled with when I started making videos one was how to end the video with out letting you viewers hanging on a Clift. Finally figured out that  music industry does a very good job of ending there music so I ended the video at the same time as the song or music ended and that did a very smooth job of ending my videos. Also I try not to run them more then 3 minutes, seem like your viewer losses interest after that. Hope this helps just some things to consider.